Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, September 4, 2018
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Libby I liked your monster macaroni, I hope you make some more recipes so that every one can read them!
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you put a picture of what it would look like.
Thoughtful:
Did you think about the way you showed your work.
Helpful:
Why did you do this about macaroni monster ?
Added a question?
Did you search the picture or take one of the real thing
Thank you Zoe c and yes I did think about the way I set my work out thank you
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