We are involved in the get NZ writing and we are writing poems based on William Carlos William's poem This is just to say.
Have you done anything naughty? Be honest
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Monday, March 2, 2020
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Hello Libby,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you did a amazing poem it has got lot's of information. Maybe you change the colour of your poem and not have the same as the other poem. Overall this is really good. What are some facts about William Carlos Williams?
Hi Libby,it's Lucy i like the way you used amazing words to describe the plums and the ice cream I think you should be proud of your poem. Do you no some stuff about William Carlos Williams?
ReplyDeleteI do not know anything about William Carlos Willams sorry lucy
ReplyDeleteHi Libby it is Ella,
ReplyDeleteI really liked you poem I found it funny and cool,
maybe next time you could add a bit more about William Carlos William in your description,
but overall I really liked your poem.