Spark writing
By Libby
One day at school we had a evil teacher that when we were not doing what we had to do she would shoved us
into a
washing machine for days. Then we were getting smaller and smaller and smaller we shrunk as small as an ant then one day she said come on time to get out. But the teacher said what no one was there so they keeped the door open Help we have shrunk but one could hear them. Hey look it’s our hero…… karen looked in and put them on her old football stadium from the divisions and saw a old sea lion. With a shotgun trying to kill them karen do something ok get ready 3 2 1 attack oh god i am so excited. I said i will get my old fashion gun it is called the fart gun and it is so smelly like rotten fish Karen said stay here i will do this oh libby can i have your fart gun please. Ok you can but you have to give it back Boom smash oh god what was that? Mya said let’s go over there and see what happened karen are you ok yes i am. Come on let’s get out of here Then we came across a old dock karen said how did you get so small anyway long story short. We all got shoved in a washing machine that’s why the dock looks pretty small and old we will be fine so where are we were going to get you back to normal size. Here we are ok lets go in just sit in the seats and wait in 3 2 1 now you are all back to normal again time to go home. Can i finish my adventure story yes i said yes you may.
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