Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 17, 2019
Animals
This is not finished
In writing we have been learning about animals and lexi and I chose to do all types of animals
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I like how you added a lot of information and I like how you have a lot of facts about animals. But I think you could of added a bit more information on each slide.
ReplyDeleteHi Libby i liked the way you added lots of information and pictures i could,nt really see the writing that well but still WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi i'm Eden from Rawhiti school and I really enjoyed your slide.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added facts in your slides about all the animals.
the picture of the lion you put in I thought was really cool.
Net, you could maybe read over it before you post it because some words were spelt incorrect. Overall, I really enjoyed your slide about animals.
~Eden~