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Wednesday, May 15, 2019

Cheetahs



In writing we have been writing about an animal and I chose to do cheetahs

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Libby it's me Caprice I enjoyed your side about cheetahs because you add good photo and your information is really good. Did you thank about adding more photos to your side. Why did you not add a glossary.

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  2. Kia ora Libby! I really enjoyed reading your report slideshow about Cheetahs! Maybe you could fix up the text on the Second page though, as it starts of with "however , there s nothing quet like" etc.
    Otherwise, well done! :)

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